Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Assignment7: My Room

My room is very spacious and clean. There is a window and I have a desk under the window. There are bookshelves besides desk. The wastebasket and stereo are under the desk. My clothes hanger is across from the desk. Although my room is spacious, I really love spending free time.

3 comments:

Ji-yeon Kim said...

I envy you your room is spacious. My bedroom is so small. I want to get a bigger room someday. ^^

lee,gunjung said...

I thought your room is very clean. Because you are like that.
Today is very busy. isn't it? hooo~~ But! Have a good day~

Kim said...

It sounds like a great place to relax. I love my bedroom too. I spend a lot of time there reading and talking on the telephone.

Here are some tips.

1. beside the desk

2. There's a window and a desk under the window. (don't use "I" because it changes the subject of the paragraph)

3. There's a wastebasked....(Use "there is/are" when you're describing a place)

4. spending my free time there (no free tiem)

5. Why did you say "although my room is spacious"? Don't you like a spacious room?